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Jenny asks…

can u tell me whats wrong with my resume?

( OK…so i took some personal info off just tell me what you think and let me know if i made a mistake.

Objective:
To obtain a position in a progressive company that will capitalize on my abilities and skills allowing me to expand my knowledge and growth with in the organization.

February 08-December 08 Leasing Specialist
Duties include opening/ closing leasing office answering phones for a Large busy class A property in Las Colinas with 480 units. Responsible for successfully leasing apartments, maintaining lists of available apartments, responding to telephone inquiries, qualifying prospective residents, showing apartments to and, preparing all move-in paperwork. Maintained market, demographic, economic and community knowledge. Recommend strategies and programs for on-site marketing activity. Initiate sales outreach plans. Provide regular status reports and task update lists. Follow up with prospective residents; telephone calls within 24 hours, follow-up card within 48 hours, and repetition of same if necessary. Ensure both timely and accurate entering of prospect and resident data into Onsite. Input daily traffic numbers maintain closing ratio of 37%, perform at 85% on shopping reports. At move in, inspect the apartment with the new resident, fill out move in inspection forms, and review all leasing paperwork and property rules. Manage renewals, track lease expirations, record notices to vacate and interview residents for reason, prepare lease expiration letters and renewal leases. Record and act on resident service requests, ensuring excellent customer service with the same day or maximum 24 hour follow up. Lived on property and was available for all emergencies, resident functions, community affiliated events and weekends. Perform other duties as required.

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January 2006 -February 2008Recruiter Irving, TX
Responsible for opening/ closing company office. Greet applicants as they arrive; Answered all inbound / outbound calls, including after business hours. Scheduled interviews checked background; drug screened potential employees, Spoke to prospective talent about our application and hiring process. Signed and delivered checks. Properly trained temporary employees in all orientation meetings. Fill orders made sure applicants were at job site on time, enter application in the system accountable for accurately typing, filing, faxing emails correspondence from clients made sure all their needs were taken care of. Checked employment references. Most of our orders were light industrial and, some clerical. Responsible for ordering and maintaining all office supplies.

Education
Academy
May 2005High School

High School Diploma

Skills
Bilingual English/ Spanish, Customer service oriented and, Typing skill are 40 wpm, Computer skills: Ms Word, PowerPoint, Excel, QuickBooks, and Internet Onsite and, Yardi. Dependable team player, energetic, self-motivated, hard working and, detail-oriented, organized. Strong work ethic. Able to work under pressure and meet deadlines.

scottparat answers:

Objective – Make it specific. If you’re applying for a job, make your objective getting that job, not some vague position.

Previous employment – Again, be specific. Was your closing ratio 37%, or was it higher? Did your occupancy increase during your employment? If anything improved, write it.

Education – Any awards while in high school? Any further training after high school? Surely you had some certification to become a Leasing Specialist.

Skills – Give examples of your strong work ethic, working under pressure, and meeting deadlines.

Also, go through and check punctuation, capitalization, etc. I noticed a few mistakes.

Joseph asks…

Can you Pleeease critique my Cover Letter?.. Please…I need a job?

I am in search of a career in Public Relations or Client Service and maintenace…. Is this cover letter going to get me that job…. also if anyone live in the NYC or North Jersey area and can assist with getting me a job… Wow… I would greatly appreciate… here it is

I’m writing to express interest and apply for the XXXXXX position. After reviewing the requirements and qualifications, I’m confident that I can exceed company expectations as an employee.

My previous coursework at Fairleigh Dickinson University and vast experience in the retail industry has given me a tremendous foundation for the marketing and client relations fields. Through signage/marketing campaigns, market research, and client and employee resolution I have found reacting to client needs and wants appropriately is key when successfully executed. I’m also familiar with fulfilling sales goals and target objectives through my retail management and telephone marketing experience. Direct interaction with consumers and clients has equipped me to quickly and effectively resolve client issues and complaints. In addition, I’ve been fortunate to have had the experience of representing several of some of the most successful companies by means of field promotional marketing. These new innovative marketing strategies put me in direct contact with clients in order to promote new products and services as well as inform and sell potential clients. These crucial areas are where I have attained much knowledge in consumer/client habits as well as employer expectations. My quick and creative thinking, critical decision making and multi-tasking capabilities are just a few skills that clients and employers alike have come to appreciate. I’m a firm believer in accountability, strong work ethics, and client satisfaction.

I’ve provided my resume for your review. I look forward to the opportunity to meet with you to further discuss my background and desire to work for XXXXXX. Please feel free to contact me via phone (XXX*XXX*XXXX) or via email at DerickBusiness@yahoo.com
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Derick Robinson

scottparat answers:

It sounds too much like advertising. You need to make it more personal to you. Also NO contractions. That is too casual. I have done some editing to make it read better.
DO NOT mention what you did at university if you graduated more than 5 years ago. If you graduated in the last 5 years then leave it in.

I am writing to express my interest in the position of XXXXXX .

My skills include quick and creative thinking, critical decision making and multi-tasking capabilities. I am a firm believer in accountability, strong work ethics, and client satisfaction.

My coursework at Fairleigh Dickinson University and experience in the retail industry has helped me to develop a keen interest in the marketing and client relations fields.

In previous positions I have used signage, marketing campaigns, market research, as well as client and employee relationships skills to learn what is and what is not appropriate in customer relations.

I am also experienced with meeting sales deadlines and obtaining target objectives through my retail management and telephone marketing experience.

Direct interaction with consumers and clients has allowed me to quickly and effectively resolve client issues and complaints.

In addition, I’ve been fortunate to have had the experience of representing several of some of the most successful companies by means of field promotional marketing. These new innovative marketing strategies meant that I was in direct contact with clients and with potential new clients.

Please find enclosed my resume for your review. I look forward to the opportunity to meet with you to further discuss my background and desire to work for XXXXXX.

Please feel free to contact me via phone (XXX*XXX*XXXX) or via email at DerickBusiness@yahoo.com
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Derick Robinson

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